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Thursday, 1 November 2018

Athletics Day!

Hello Again Bloggers!
The for past 3 weeks, our whole class has been working on recounts.
We have been focusing mostly on things like:

  • Time connectives
  • Descriptive Language (similes, metaphors, sets of 3, etc.)
  • Advanced Punctuation (semi-colons, colons, brackets, hyphens, etc.)
I found it hard to include descriptive language throughout my recount, because I was only thinking about the events, and not how I can make them seem more exciting. 
I think I have improved on my punctuation quite a lot compared to the last time we worked on recounts. Here is my recount:

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