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Monday, 31 October 2016

100 word challenge


This is my 100 word challenge for the week.
This week I had to use the sentence 'as the smoke cleared.' I used it in my starting sentence. I hope you enjoy :)
As the smoke cleared, I sped off. I couldn’t stand seeing it anymore. I hate it; the cheesy movies that my sister makes me watch. Smoke blows out of the speakers. Ugh, I can’t believe that she actually likes the genre ‘romance’ “I can’t watch it anymore!” I announced. She glared at me in surprise. I couldn’t help it. I had to tell her otherwise I would suffer for years coming. “GO!” she screamed. I could see fire in her eyes. I was clueless of what to say. At least I had gotten out of watching the movies. I just had to get of one more thing...
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9 comments:

  1. Anonymous31 October 2016 at 12:31

    Ariana i love your story

    sincerily Tilly

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  2. Anonymous31 October 2016 at 17:52

    This is fantastic and it made me smile. Sisters, eh? :)
    I like the range of sentences you have written - some short, some longer - this adds effect to the challenge. I wonder what the one more thing is you had to get out of...? :)

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  3. Allan Robertson1 November 2016 at 07:45

    I really enjoyed reading these one hundred words because you have introduced a wonderful scene and managed to imbue it with personalities. Personally I enjoy a good romantic movie, be it Star Wars or James Bond. What is your favourite movie genre? Nice to see you using varied punctuation throughout your writing.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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    1. Anonymous1 November 2016 at 09:14

      Hello,
      Thankyou for viewing my 100 word challenge. I don't really have a favourite movie genre, I just dislike the genre 'romance' I find it cheesy.

      Thanks :)
      Ariana.

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  4. Unknown2 November 2016 at 05:53

    Hi,

    This is a very confusing story, I don't really understand it. I love this part, 'I sped off.' Have you used the prompt correctly?

    Well done.

    http://ribbledriveprimary.net/year62016/
    Daniel W.


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    2. Anonymous4 November 2016 at 09:58

      Hi,
      Maybe you weren't reading it right, maybe read it again?
      And yes I did use the prompt correctly, the prompt was to use the sentence 'as the smoke cleared' and I used that sentence at the start. Thanks for commenting on my blog,

      Ariana,
      Yaldhurst Model School.

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  5. Mrs Boyce4 November 2016 at 20:13

    Hi Ariana,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done!
    This is a typical sister scenario! Sisters don't spare each other.
    I wonder what else are you trying to get out of?
    Keep up the good work.
    Mrs Boyce
    Ireland.

    https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net

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    1. Anonymous8 November 2016 at 11:39

      Thanks for the comment and sorry for the late reply.
      I didn't really think of was I was going to get out of next; Maybe you could find out in my next one hundred word challenge. :)

      Thanks,
      Ariana.

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