About me!

This is my 'About Me' Slide. Everyone in my class is doing an 'About me' project and I chose to do a slide. Please give me feedback after you've gone through the slide :)

Quality Blog Posting!

Today we had a lesson with our principal on how to improve our blog posts. I found that one of the most important things in a blog posts for me is adding detail. We want to tell our viewers why we are posting, and what we are posting about. At the moment, all of our class is focusing on Quality blog posting, as well as commenting. 

Number 1 was explaining the posts our class saw, as one person's post we saw had posted an animation, using scratch. The 2nd person's post we looked at was about a flag. The first two posts we looked at didn't use much detail, and didn't tell us what the post was about. The 3rd person's post told us about what activity she was doing, and this person used lots of detail. If you'd like to have a look at this person's post, here is the link: http://awahonoisabelj.blogspot.co.nz/2018/02/jumping-in-minute.html#comment-form

Please give me feedback on this post, and tell me what other things are important in a blog post, if I missed it. Thanks for reading:)